Gods of Jade and Shadow, by Sylvia Garcia-Moreno

<a href="https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/36510722-gods-of-jade-and-shadow" style="float: left; padding-right: 20px"><img border="0" alt="Gods of Jade and Shadow" src="https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1543268579l/36510722._SX98_.jpg" /></a><a href="https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/36510722-gods-of-jade-and-shadow">Gods of Jade and Shadow</a> by <a href="https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/4088550.Silvia_Moreno_Garcia">Silvia Moreno-Garcia</a><br/>
My rating: <a href="https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/3404295082">3 of 5 stars</a><br /><br />
This book has its good moments, but overall I just couldn't get into it. The story is entirely familiar--Hero's Journey meets Love Story. I have now spoiled the plot. Our protagonists, the god Hun-Kame and Cassiopeia Tun, end up as stereotypes--something the author kind of lets us in on, telling us that gods cannot have the complex inner lives that people can. <br /><br />What should have been a strong point was the setting--Mexico in the 1920's was in a fascinating phase of post-colonial cultural imitation of Europe. They had their own interpretations of all the American and European trends and fashions of the time. We were promised a look at these, but a look was all we got--a bit of fashion commentary, some broad cultural brush strokes. There was so much potential here that didn't get realized. Instead, the narrative focuses on the growing humanity of Hun-Kame and the solidifying of Cassiopeia's personality. Very nice, but done a million times--it needed that fresh period staging.<br /><br />What was a strong point was the relationship between Cassiopeia and Martin, her cousin, heir to the well-off Leyva household. He was the villain, but Moreno-Garcia skillfully portrays him as a clueless, privileged oaf who cannot understand why his "overtures" (occasional politeness when ordering her about, rather than belligerence) are not better received. Very timely. Not enough to really save it for me.
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Middlegame, by Seanan McGuire

Middlegame by Seanan McGuire
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Seanan McGuire is a very prolific author, and sometimes that shows in her books--all well written, some come off formulaic. The beginning of Middlegame seems like it's going to go that way. Then it takes an incredible left turn and you get a set of characters that have more depth and complexity than it seems like real humans can have, even. I spread my reading out over several nights, and this book kept me up past bedtime several times.

The trope of soul mates finding each other through remote presence is worked really well here. Roger and Dodger are the embodiment of Math and Language, and they complete each other. The book weaves the plot and their growth together seamlessly, one couldn't happen without the other. And then halfway through the book we get Erin, another embodiment with equal depth. Really amazing work.

The plot underneath is sort of ordinary, and that's fine. Alchemy is real (and sort of like magic), and several famous figures (Twain, Baum, etc.) have been working on it. The (self-proclaimed, and there's a lot of this) best alchemist in history was a woman ahead of her time, and wrote a fantasy primer on it disguised as children's literature. Her constructed protege (just like Frankenstein's monster, so I guess he was an alchemist too), James Reed, aims to complete her work. And this is why I can't give it a full 5 stars--the villains (Reed and his construct assistant Leigh Barrow) are both cardboard characters--over the top embodiments of evil. Comic book speech bubbles couldn't save them. So they are foils for the real stars. Also the ending involves what I think of as literary cheating, but endings are hard, particularly so for such a sweeping work.

Hands down the best thing I have read from McGuire, and it shows what she can really do. I hope she'll go for this level of quality over quantity all the time.


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